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Mr. Heneghan • Secondary English & Lit
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Evidence Under Pressure

Year 9 Power of Speech • Impromptu • Evidence

You cannot research an impromptu speech. You can still use evidence: a specific memory, a well-known fact, an analogy, a hypothetical or a statistic you are confident about. This page shows what to reach for and what to avoid.

Four sources you already have

SourceStrengthLimitation
Personal experienceSpecific, vivid and credible.Not representative; privacy.
General knowledgeWidely shared and easy to explain.Can be outdated or vague.
AnalogyMakes an unfamiliar idea clear.Does not prove anything.
HypotheticalTests a principle.Can feel irrelevant if poorly chosen.
Known statisticAdds scale.Must be accurate; do not invent.

Personal experience

A specific memory is the most reliable impromptu evidence. It is yours, it is detailed and it does not require a source. Keep it short and connect it to the point.

WeakStronger
“I have seen a lot of waste at school.”“Last Thursday, I watched the canteen bin fill with untouched sandwiches by 1pm.”
“Sport is important.”“The first time I played in a team, I spent the whole game on the bench and still felt part of it.”
“Family matters.”“My grandmother rings every Sunday at exactly 10am, even when there is nothing to say.”

Do not use someone else's private story without consent. If the memory involves another person, change identifying details or choose a different example.

General knowledge

General knowledge is useful when it is widely shared and easy to explain. Avoid niche facts you are not sure about. If you are uncertain, say so.

These phrases are safe only if the claim is genuinely general. Do not use “everyone knows” to smuggle in an opinion.

Analogy

An analogy can carry an impromptu response a long way. It gives the audience a familiar image and lets you explain a relationship quickly.

IdeaAnalogyWhere it breaks
FriendshipA bridge.Bridges are built once; friendships are maintained.
LearningBuilding a wall.Walls are linear; learning loops back.
ReputationGlass.Glass can be recycled; reputation rarely is.
TeamworkAn orchestra.Orchestras have a conductor; teams often do not.

State the analogy, then say where it stops. That single sentence makes the comparison honest.

Hypotheticals

A hypothetical tests a principle: “Imagine you found a wallet with no identification. What would you do?” Use it to make an abstract question concrete, but do not let it replace the answer.

HypotheticalWhat it tests
“Imagine the library closed tomorrow.”The value of public space.
“Imagine you had one wish.”Priorities and consequences.
“Imagine everyone could hear your thoughts.”Privacy and honesty.

Statistics

Only use a statistic if you are confident it is accurate. If you are not sure, use a qualitative claim instead: “Many students ...” or “It is common for ...”. Never invent a number to sound authoritative.

RiskSafer alternative
“Ninety per cent of students ...”“Most students I know ...”
“Every year, thousands ...”“It happens often enough that ...”
“Studies show ...”“There is evidence that ...” (if you can name it) or drop it.

Honest uncertainty

If you do not know, say so. It is better than a fabricated fact. You can still make a strong response:

Activity: four kinds of evidence

  1. Choose a prompt.
  2. Respond using a personal example.
  3. Respond again using an analogy.
  4. Respond again using a hypothetical.
  5. Respond again using general knowledge.
  6. Discuss which kind felt most natural and which was most persuasive.

One concrete example beats three vague ones. In a short response, choose the detail that makes the point visible and stop.

Common errors

Next, study thinking on your feet to use these sources when the plan goes wrong. The humour and warmth page adds tone.