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Mr. Heneghan • Secondary English & Lit
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Audience and Purpose

Year 9 Power of Speech • Fundamentals • Audience

The same speech can succeed with one audience and fail with another. Audience analysis is the practical work of finding out who is listening, what they need and how much they already know. Purpose is the work of deciding what you want the speech to do.

Start with purpose

PurposeQuestionSuccess looks like
InformWhat should the audience know afterwards?They can explain the idea in their own words.
ExplainWhat should the audience understand?They can follow the process or concept.
PersuadeWhat should the audience think, feel or do?They accept the claim or take the action.
EntertainWhat should the audience enjoy?They laugh, relax or feel absorbed.
InspireWhat should the audience feel moved to do or be?They leave with energy or commitment.
Mark an occasionWhat should the audience recognise or remember?The moment feels acknowledged and held.

Write your purpose in one sentence before you write anything else. “By the end of this speech, I want the audience to ...” If you cannot finish the sentence, the speech is not ready.

Audience profile

DimensionQuestionsPractical effect
KnowledgeWhat do they already know? What terms need defining?Level of explanation and jargon.
AttitudeAre they supportive, sceptical, indifferent or hostile?How much evidence and concession to include.
ValuesWhat do they care about? What feels fair or unfair?Framing and examples.
ExpectationsWhat do they expect from this occasion?Length, tone and format.
AccessWhat do they need in order to hear and understand?Volume, captions, visuals, plain language.
PowerWho has authority in this room?How direct or deferential to be.
LanguageWhat languages and varieties are present?Vocabulary, idiom and translation.

You will not always have full information. Make reasonable assumptions, then check them with a teacher, host or classmate. If possible, ask the audience in advance about access needs and prior knowledge.

Register

Register is the level of formality and style. It is not simply “formal” or “informal”; it is a range of choices that signal relationship, occasion and respect.

RegisterFeaturesUse it when
FormalComplete sentences, technical vocabulary, restrained humour.Ceremonies, assemblies, formal debates.
ConsultativeClear, polite, audience-friendly language.Most classroom and community speeches.
InformalContractions, slang, direct address, shared references.Peer audiences and relaxed occasions.
IntimateQuiet tone, personal detail, close address.Tributes, toasts and small gatherings.

Register can shift within a speech. A formal opening can give way to a warmer personal story, then return to formality for the close. The shift should be deliberate, not accidental.

Inclusive language

Inclusive language helps the audience feel addressed rather than excluded. It is not about being “politically correct”; it is about accuracy and respect.

Adapting evidence and examples

Evidence should be credible to this audience. A statistic may persuade a panel but bore a Year 7 class; a personal story may move a family gathering but seem irrelevant to a formal debate. Choose evidence that the audience can recognise, verify and care about.

AudienceEvidence that worksEvidence to avoid
PeersShared experience, concrete examples, humour.Abstract theory without examples.
Teachers or panelData, sources, clear reasoning.Unsupported generalisations.
Younger studentsStories, analogies, simple demonstrations.Jargon and long statistics.
Community membersLocal examples, named places, lived experience.Outside experts with no local connection.
Formal ceremonyPersonal anecdote, tribute, shared memory.Heavy data or partisan argument.

Adaptation in practice

Take one paragraph and rewrite it for a different audience. Change the vocabulary, the example and the level of explanation. Then compare the two versions and ask what each audience needs that the other does not.

Do not confuse audience analysis with flattery. Telling people what they want to hear is not the same as understanding them. Good audience analysis helps you communicate truthfully and clearly, not manipulate.

Activity: two audiences

  1. Choose a topic you know well.
  2. Write a two-sentence explanation for a Year 7 audience.
  3. Rewrite it for a panel of adults who know the topic.
  4. Underline what changed: vocabulary, examples, length, tone.
  5. Explain which version was harder to write and why.

Common errors

Next, study listening and feedback to see how audience response can guide a speech in real time. The ethics and inclusion page develops the responsibility side of speaking.