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Mr. Heneghan • Secondary English & Lit
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Visual Aids and Data

Year 9 Power of Speech • Expository • Visuals

A visual aid should do something the voice cannot do as well: show a shape, a relationship, a sequence or a comparison. Too often, slides become a script on a wall. This page covers honest data display, accessible design and the discipline of describing what the audience is seeing.

What visuals are good at

Visual jobBest formExample
Show a trendLine graphTemperature over thirty years.
Compare categoriesBar chartEnrolments by faculty.
Show parts of a wholeStacked bar or pie chart (sparingly)Where a school's energy is used.
Show a processFlowchart or numbered diagramHow a bill becomes law.
Show locationMapWhere the fires occurred.
Show an objectPhotograph or diagramThe parts of a cell.
Show a relationshipScatter plotStudy time and results.

Choose the visual that fits the question, not the one that looks most impressive. A simple bar chart is often more honest than a dramatic three-dimensional graphic.

Honest graphs

ProblemWhy it misleadsFix
Truncated y-axisSmall differences look huge.Start at zero where appropriate; label the axis clearly.
Inconsistent scalesComparisons become meaningless.Use the same scale across panels.
Missing baselineThe audience cannot judge change.Show the starting point.
Cherry-picked rangeThe trend looks different from the full data.Show the full period or explain the selection.
3D effectsDistorts area and perspective.Use flat, labelled charts.
Correlation presented as causationImplies a causal link that the data cannot show.Say “associated with”, not “caused by”.

Slide design

Your slides should not contain your speech. If the audience is reading, they are not listening. Use keywords, images and one clear visual per idea.

Describing a visual aloud

Some audience members cannot see the screen, and everyone benefits from a clear description. Describe the shape and the point before the detail.

StepExample
Name it“This is a line graph showing average rainfall from 1990 to 2020.”
Orient it“The horizontal axis is the year; the vertical axis is millimetres.”
State the pattern“Rainfall is variable, but the trend is slightly downward.”
Point to the key detail“The lowest year is 2019, at about 220 millimetres.”
Explain the limit“One graph cannot show the full picture; local variation is large.”

Do not say “as you can see” and leave it there. If the point matters, say what the audience should see.

Data in a speech

Numbers are hard to hear. Round them where precision is not essential, and give them a comparison the audience can feel.

Hard to hearEasier to hearWhy
“3,487 students”“Almost 3,500 students”Rounded numbers are easier to hold.
“A 0.7 per cent increase”“About one in every 140 people”Gives a human scale.
“1.2 million tonnes”“The weight of about 200,000 cars”Creates a comparison.
“Statistically significant”“The difference is unlikely to be chance”Translates the term.

Always keep the exact figure in your notes so you can answer a question accurately. Rounding is for speech, not for the record.

Accessibility

NeedAdjustment
Vision impairmentDescribe every visual; provide large-print or text alternatives.
Colour vision deficiencyUse labels and patterns as well as colour.
Hearing impairmentProvide captions for video; face the audience; repeat questions.
NeurodiversityKeep slides predictable; limit animation; provide an outline.
Physical accessEnsure the screen, lectern and controls are reachable.
Language diversityDefine key terms; avoid unexplained acronyms.

Technical backup

Activity: rebuild a misleading graph

  1. Find a graph in a news article or advertisement.
  2. Identify the axis, scale, baseline and source.
  3. Write one sentence describing what the graph actually shows.
  4. Write one sentence describing what it seems to imply.
  5. Redraw it honestly, or explain what is missing.
  6. Practise describing your redrawn graph aloud in thirty seconds.

If the visual needs a paragraph of explanation, it is not doing its job. Simplify the visual or cut it. The speaker should carry the argument; the visual should carry the shape.

Common errors

Next, study demonstrating a process to combine speech, action and equipment. The questioning and clarity page shows how to check that the visual worked.