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Mr. Heneghan • Secondary English & Lit
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Structure of an Explanation

Year 9 Power of Speech • Expository • Structure

An explanation is a guided tour. The audience needs to know where they are, why each stop matters and how it connects to the destination. This page sets out a reliable structure and the signposts that make it audible.

The explanatory frame

SectionJobTypical length
OrientationEstablish the question, context and key terms.15–20%
MechanismExplain how or why it works in two or three steps.50–60%
Example or demonstrationMake the mechanism concrete.15–20%
CloseAnswer the question and consolidate the idea.10–15%

For a two-minute explanation, that might be twenty seconds of orientation, seventy seconds of mechanism, twenty seconds of example and ten seconds of close. For a longer speech, add another mechanism step or a second example rather than padding the introduction.

Orientation

The first thirty seconds should do four things:

  1. Hook the audience with a concrete detail, question or surprise.
  2. State the question the speech will answer.
  3. Define the key term the audience needs.
  4. Preview the steps.

Model opening: “Every time you send a message, it is broken into pieces, sent along different paths and put back together. Most of the time, the pieces arrive in the right order. Today I want to explain how that happens, and what goes wrong when it does not.”

This is an original teaching example, not a transcript of a real speech.

Mechanism sections

Break the mechanism into two or three steps. Each step should answer a sub-question and connect to the next. Use a consistent pattern:

StepPatternExample
1What happens first?“The message is split into packets.”
2What happens next?“Each packet is addressed and sent independently.”
3What is the result?“The packets are reassembled at the destination.”

If the mechanism is cyclical, say so: “The process then repeats.” If it has two parallel paths, signal the comparison: “There are two ways this can happen.” If it is contested, say that too: “Researchers disagree about which step matters most.”

Signposts for explanation

FunctionPhrases
Frame“The question I want to answer is ...” “To understand this, we need to start with ...”
Sequence“First ... next ... finally ...” “At the same time ...”
Cause“Because of this ...” “This leads to ...” “As a result ...”
Contrast“However ...” “On the other hand ...” “Not all cases work this way.”
Example“Take the case of ...” “For instance ...”
Clarify“In other words ...” “What I mean is ...”
Emphasis“The key step is ...” “This is where it gets interesting.”
Close“So, to answer the question ...” “That is why ...”

Use signposts at the turns, not in every sentence. If the audience can hear the structure without noticing the labels, the signposting is working.

Explanatory patterns

PatternShapeBest for
ProcessStep 1, step 2, step 3, result.How something happens.
Cause and effectCause, mechanism, effect, qualification.Why something happens.
Part and wholeComponents, relationships, overall function.How a system works.
Compare and contrastTwo cases, similarities, differences, conclusion.Explaining by comparison.
Problem and solutionProblem, causes, possible responses, evaluation.Explaining an issue and options.
Myth and correctionCommon belief, evidence, better explanation.Correcting a misconception.

Choose one pattern and let it govern the body. A speech that moves from process to comparison to problem without signalling will feel disordered even if each section is clear.

Closes

A close should return to the opening question and give the audience a compact answer. It can also point to consequences or invite a question.

CloseExampleEffect
Answer the question“So the next time a message arrives, you will know it was not one journey but many.”Consolidates the explanation.
Return to the image“Remember the split message? It is reassembled before you ever see it.”Creates a satisfying circle.
Consequence“That is why a single lost packet rarely stops the message.”Shows why the explanation matters.
Question“What happens when the pieces arrive out of order?”Invites further inquiry.

Model skeleton

Question: Why does the moon appear to change shape?

Orientation: “Last night the moon looked like a thin curve. Next week it will look full. The moon has not changed shape.”

Step 1: The moon orbits Earth and is lit by the sun.

Step 2: We see different amounts of the lit half from Earth.

Step 3: The cycle takes about 29.5 days.

Example: Hold a ball under a lamp and turn around it.

Close: “The moon is always half lit. What changes is our view.”

This is an original teaching example, not a transcript of a real speech.

Activity: build the frame

  1. Write your explanatory question.
  2. Write one sentence for each of the three or four steps.
  3. Add a signpost to the start of each step.
  4. Write a concrete example or demonstration.
  5. Write a close that answers the question.
  6. Read the skeleton aloud in ninety seconds. Where does it need another step?

Structure is for the listener. A plan that makes sense on paper may still be invisible in speech. Say your signposts aloud and listen for whether they guide the ear.

Common errors

Next, study examples and analogy to make the structure concrete. The jargon and plain language page makes the wording accessible.