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Mr. Heneghan • Secondary English & Lit
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Outcomes and Skills

Year 11 ATAR Literature • Picnic at Hanging Rock • Formative success criteria

These outcomes describe what students should be able to do by the end of the unit. They are formative: use them to plan, self-check and give feedback. They do not rank students or record results.

Knowledge

Skills

SkillWhat it looks likeNext step if it is not yet secure
Close readingSelects a short quotation, describes what it does, and explains how it shapes the reader's understanding.Annotate one sentence at a time: verb, image, gap, effect.
Structural analysisConnects a choice of sequence, frame or omission to the novel's meaning.Ask: what would change if this scene came earlier, later or not at all?
Character analysisExplains how a character is constructed by voice, action and the responses of others.Track one character's descriptions and note how they change.
Contextual judgementUses historical or critical context to sharpen a reading, and says why it matters.Write one sentence beginning "This context matters here because...".
Critical writingStates a claim, embeds evidence, explains effect, and answers a counter-reading.Rewrite one paragraph so every quotation is followed by an explanation.
Creative and oral responseMakes a deliberate transformation or spoken walkthrough and explains the choices.Name the effect you wanted, then change one choice to achieve it more clearly.

Formative success criteria

What progress looks like

Progress is visible when a student moves from asking "what happened?" to asking "what does the novel do with not knowing?" A stronger response usually has a narrower claim, better-chosen evidence and a clearer account of the reader's experience. The move from "the ending is mysterious" to "the novel makes the reader share the community's need for an explanation, then withholds the consolation of one" is the learning.

Teacher note

Choose two criteria for a feedback lesson rather than all seven. Model the difference between "the novel is ambiguous" and "the afterword replaces one mystery with another by destroying the records that might explain it". The second sentence is the learning.