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Mr. Heneghan • Secondary English & Lit
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Outcomes and Skills

Year 11 ATAR Literature • Oryx and Crake • Formative success criteria

These outcomes describe what students should be able to do by the end of the unit. They are formative: use them to plan, self-check and give feedback. They do not rank students or record results.

Knowledge

Skills

SkillWhat it looks likeNext step if it is not yet secure
Close readingSelects a short quotation, describes what it does, and explains how it shapes the reader's understanding.Annotate one sentence at a time: verb, image, tone, implication.
Structural analysisConnects a choice of sequence, flashback or delayed reveal to the novel's meaning.Ask: what would change if this information came earlier or later?
Worldbuilding analysisExplains how an invented detail satirises a real practice or belief.Name the real-world target and the effect of the exaggeration.
Ethical analysisIdentifies a moral question, explains competing answers, and connects it to the novel's construction.Write one question beginning "Who is responsible for...?" and answer it twice.
Critical writingStates a claim, embeds evidence, explains effect, and answers a counter-reading.Rewrite one paragraph so every quotation is followed by an explanation.
Creative and oral responseMakes a deliberate transformation or spoken walkthrough and explains the choices.Name the effect you wanted, then change one choice to achieve it more clearly.

Formative success criteria

What progress looks like

Progress is visible when a student moves from describing the dystopian world to explaining how the novel makes that world feel plausible. A stronger response usually has a narrower claim, better-chosen evidence and a clearer account of the reader's experience. The move from "the novel warns about genetic engineering" to "the novel makes genetic engineering feel ordinary by embedding it in brand names, office life and shopping" is the learning.

Teacher note

Choose two criteria for a feedback lesson rather than all seven. Model the difference between "Crake is a villain" and "Crake's plan is persuasive because it offers an escape from suffering, which is exactly what makes it dangerous". The second sentence is the learning.